英语写作教学一电子邮件Writing——电子邮件[文体指导]英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同，但略有差异一般说来英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分：1．标题栏一般写在左上角，包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址、发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱。
Writing——电子邮件
[文体指导]
英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同，但略有差异。一般说来英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分：
1．标题栏
一般写在左上角，包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址、发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。
排列格式为：
FROM：发件人姓名、邮箱地址
DATE：发件日期
TO：收件人姓名、邮箱地址
SUBJECT：简明扼要地介绍信的内容。通常是单词、短语，偶尔用句子。
2．称呼
位于正文的开头。如何称呼，要看发件人与收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友，可以直呼其名；若是长辈或上级，要在姓氏前加上Mr，Miss，Mrs，Dr，Professor等表示称谓的词。
3．正文
正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后，就要开门见山地说明写信的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由，但对于电子邮件的回复，须紧扣“回复”这一字眼，要“问有所答，疑有所解”。在高考中，要按照试题要求的内容来写，最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理，语言要准确、流畅。
4．信尾客套话
结尾的客套话通常很简洁，如Yours，Thanks等，一般写在左下角。
5．签名
一般写在左下角，有时也写在右下角。
[亮点句式]
常见的开头方式：
表示高兴：I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your email dated May 1st.
表示感谢：Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting email.
表示关心与询问：How are you these days? /How are you getting on these days? /How are you getting on with your work/studies?
表示抱歉：I am sorry that I did not reply soon but I have been very busy these days.
表示遗憾：I was sorry to learn that you did not do well in the examination./I am so upset to hear that you are ill these days.
常用的结束语有：
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Please give my regards to your family.
Take good care of you and keep in touch.
[写作任务]
假如你是李华，你在新学校学习已两个多月，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。
1．介绍你的学校和班级；
2．你的作息时间；
3．你的同学；
4．你最喜欢的老师。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 记叙文
时态 一般现在时为主
主题 学校生活
人称 第一人称为主
结构 首段：提出写邮件目的；第二段：学校具体生活安排；第三段：作息安排。
[遣词造句]
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1．a wellknown/famous school一所著名的学校
2．amazing 令人惊讶的
3．get on/along well with sb. 与某人相处得好
4．way of teaching 教学方式
5．nothing like 完全不像
6．take part in afterclass activities 参加课外活动
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
(一)完成句子
1．每间教室都有一台电脑和一个与电影院屏幕大小差不多的特殊屏幕。
Every room has a computer with a special screen，almost as big as a cinema screen.
2．我认为上她的课不会厌倦。
I don't think I will be bored in her class.
(二)句式升级
3．My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang.Ms Wang's way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.(用定语从句合并句子)
My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.
4．And there are sixty students in my class.They are all hardworking.(用定语从句合并句子)
And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hardworking.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】
Dear Jane，
I've been at Senior High School for more than two months.I'm writing down my thoughts about my new school life.
My new school is a wellknown school with a long history.There are 50 classes，more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school.The classrooms are amazing.Every room has a computer with a special screen，almost as big as a cinema screen.And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hardworking.I'm getting on very well with my classmates.My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.She usually tells us something in an interesting way.I don't think I will be bored in her class.
We usually get up at 6：30 and our class starts at 8：00.I always take part in colorful afterclass activities and we go to bed at ten.
Bye for now!
Li Hua
